Oh wow! This is bold, expressive energy! The language is intense and full of imagery, and you lean into the physicality of desire without holding back. There’s a strong sense of surrender running through it—someone overwhelmed by passion, pulled into an almost otherworldly state. The lines about “coffee-colored eyes with honey hues” and “butterfly wings” are vivid and memorable. The emotion is so beautiful, especially when it shifts from the physical to the spiritual: longing, connection, predestination.
Thank youuu incredibly much my dear Isabela for your flattering compliments, it truly means more than you know to me 🥺🩷 It feels like you make my poem come to life through your detailed and thoughtful analysis, your messages always make my day!! 💞💞
Mmmmmm rich and intense in that old-school, sweeping way 💖. Elena!!! This is bold, almost cosmic, and then you also lean all the way into desire without holding back.
Your sheet talent lets us move from physical sensation to something almost mythic, like the body is only the doorway to a much bigger collision.
I get the sense that someone is letting the feeling take over the pen and trusting the momentum. Even when the language goes big, the emotion underneath feels honest and true.
Awww, thank you incredibly much my dear Isabela for expressing so beautifully your reflections and overwhelming me with your sweet compliments!! 💞💞
So gorgeouslyy said, "the body is only the doorway to a much bigger collision", I am so thrilled that my poem inspired you to convey this, indeed I felt like the physical desire came only as a part of a cosmic interlude.
And yess I really let the feeling take over the pen hehe, the sheet became a constellation where the stars are represented by the love nurtured 🥰
Thank youuu, truly, you are the kindest and your insights together with your genius analysis always bring me an undescribable enthusiasm 💖😽💖
That was great. It reads and feels modern but tells a tale of almost an old-fashioned kind of romance, with some real sensuality running through it. Beautiful.
Incredible, beautiful, and powerful writing as always x) <3 <3 WE NEED MORE!!
Aww, thank you soo much my sweet angel, now I am preparing more hehe, LOVE YOUUU!!💞💞
i love this. wow!!
Aw, thank you soo much, I am so glad that you loved it!! 🩷
Oh wow! This is bold, expressive energy! The language is intense and full of imagery, and you lean into the physicality of desire without holding back. There’s a strong sense of surrender running through it—someone overwhelmed by passion, pulled into an almost otherworldly state. The lines about “coffee-colored eyes with honey hues” and “butterfly wings” are vivid and memorable. The emotion is so beautiful, especially when it shifts from the physical to the spiritual: longing, connection, predestination.
Beautiful!!!
Thank youuu incredibly much my dear Isabela for your flattering compliments, it truly means more than you know to me 🥺🩷 It feels like you make my poem come to life through your detailed and thoughtful analysis, your messages always make my day!! 💞💞
Awwww 🥹 Always. Truly. 🩷
Your words already carry so much life. I’m just responding to what’s already there.
Keep writing. I’ll always be happy to read. 💞🫶✨
Whoa!
Burn me in this lake of fire!!
I enjoyed this, and I'll be stealing a few lines, of course❤️😁
So poetically said, that sounds truly magical! 🥰
Thank you a lott, feel free to get inspired by it and to borrow a few lines suree hehe✨🩷
Thank you too ❤️🤭
Merry Christmas Elena🥳
Thank youu, Merry Christmass Ukong!!🥳💕
So beautiful & tangible.
Thank you soo much Piia! 🥰
Oh my my! I am swooning on the floor here. I wish I could write like this. 🥰
Aww, thank you soo much, you flatter me🫣🥰🩷
Mmmmmm rich and intense in that old-school, sweeping way 💖. Elena!!! This is bold, almost cosmic, and then you also lean all the way into desire without holding back.
Your sheet talent lets us move from physical sensation to something almost mythic, like the body is only the doorway to a much bigger collision.
I get the sense that someone is letting the feeling take over the pen and trusting the momentum. Even when the language goes big, the emotion underneath feels honest and true.
Really beautiful work here!!! 💖🫶✨
Awww, thank you incredibly much my dear Isabela for expressing so beautifully your reflections and overwhelming me with your sweet compliments!! 💞💞
So gorgeouslyy said, "the body is only the doorway to a much bigger collision", I am so thrilled that my poem inspired you to convey this, indeed I felt like the physical desire came only as a part of a cosmic interlude.
And yess I really let the feeling take over the pen hehe, the sheet became a constellation where the stars are represented by the love nurtured 🥰
Thank youuu, truly, you are the kindest and your insights together with your genius analysis always bring me an undescribable enthusiasm 💖😽💖
Awww thank you so much! What a beautiful response 🫶💖✨
No worries my dear, just like each of your messages!🥰🩷🩷
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That was great. It reads and feels modern but tells a tale of almost an old-fashioned kind of romance, with some real sensuality running through it. Beautiful.
Thank you so much, I am really glad it came across this way, I always appreciate your support!
Wow, Elena! This is powerful and beautiful! So sensual and romantic. I love it!
Thank you so much, Chris! It truly means a lot to me 😊