The sky opens its doors and allows us, To catch a glimpse at its splendor, thus, We take our chance and contemplate in awe, The once in a lifetime miracle that we saw. Despite its evanescent character, it somehow, Succeeds to leave a mark in its trace of how, Fleeting moments can last forever in our memory, As we rewrite over and over a never-ending story Of the wonder that transformed our perspectives, In an irreversible way, now becoming detectives, For the meaning of our own life; it can only be Found during our journey here and we'll be free; Released from the doom of the soul; Saved, Our redemption comes from within; Carved, With bare hands in emerald, our truth is sacred, Glowing eternally whereas the dimness is buried.
I really enjoyed how this poem!
You're the best writer I know here <3 Your work is incredible :')
Beautiful.
Very nicely put! Thankyou!
A beautiful poem. It reads so well and is vivid with its imagery. Great stuff.
Beautiful ✨️
So lovely.
I love your style so much, Elena.
Love the imagery and flow of this poem. Great work!