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The Imagined Heart πŸ’œ's avatar

Beautiful, the most beautiful line is I am no longer a shadow.

elena's poems's avatar

Awh thank you sooo much, that is the line I also enjoyed the most while writing hehe, sending love dearπŸ’•πŸ’•

Izabella Casagrande's avatar

So mystical and beautiful. Love the images 🌱πŸͺΎπŸŒ¬οΈ

elena's poems's avatar

Thank you so, so much my dear, I’m grateful for your kind words and complimentsπŸ’•πŸ’•

Nimila's avatar

Very melancholic, the desire to be free contrasts beautiful with the sense of oppression, loved the verse: "Yet she can’t control her wings" which opens endless possibilities. πŸ’–

elena's poems's avatar

Thank you so, so much for your insight and such a beautiful comment, I am so glad that the lines resonated, this truly means so much to me. πŸ’•πŸ’•

Priyanshu Raj's avatar

Yes and incredibly happy to meet you here.. πŸ₯ΉπŸ₯°πŸ€—

elena's poems's avatar

LikewiseeeπŸ₯°πŸ«ΆπŸ»πŸ«ΆπŸ»

Priyanshu Raj's avatar

πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ₯°

Law of Love's avatar

Another beautiful piece πŸ₯Ή

Your writing flows in such a lovely way <3

elena's poems's avatar

Thank you sooo much my dear, your kind words truly mean a lot to meπŸ₯ΉπŸ©·

I wasn’t really that sure about the musicality of it or if the rhymes work well, so reading your sweet comment made me truly happy 🫢🏻

Law of Love's avatar

It works so well!! You have a lovely talent in poetry πŸ₯Ή it's beautiful to read πŸ’—

elena's poems's avatar

Aww I’m so honoured to receive such delightful and heartfelt words!! πŸ₯ΉπŸ’• Your genuine appreciation means extremely much to me, it helps me to keep on going here🩷

I am looking forward to read more of your posts as well, your voice is so special 🫢🏻

Law of Love's avatar

Bless you πŸ₯ΉπŸ’—

elena's poems's avatar

Bless you tooo dearπŸ’•πŸ’•

Priyanshu Raj's avatar

wow you're so talented.. such a wonderful poem.. πŸ₯Ή

elena's poems's avatar

Thank youu so much for your kind words and support, it means a lot to me πŸ₯ΉπŸ«ΆπŸ»

Priyanshu Raj's avatar

Pleasure is all mine.. looking forward to read more from you.. 🫢🏻🀍

elena's poems's avatar

Aww what a wonderful complimentπŸ€—πŸ«ΆπŸ», I will read more of your work as well✨

Priyanshu Raj's avatar

Thank you so much..🫢🏻πŸ₯Ή yes please you can read some of my articles and notes whenever you have a moment. πŸ€—

elena's poems's avatar

I am exploring your articles right now hehe🫢🏻, and I’m so ready for the next ones as wellπŸ₯°

Priyanshu Raj's avatar

You're so sweet elena..🫢🏻 thank you so much and I'll definitely follow your journey..πŸ€—πŸ₯°